INTRODUCTIN THESIS STATEMENT: Everybody has some unknown characteristic features. Although people know these features, they don't want them to be revealed. I have some interesting and different features too. I'm an angry boy. I cook very well. I'm obsessed about cleanless.
BODY PARAGRAPH 1: Altough people see me as a funny boy, I actually am a very angry boy.
*Everything that I don't like can make me annoyed.
*The real problem is when I get annoyed I can't control myself.
*Also despite relation about us, I can get angry to anybody.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2:Women think men can't cook very well.But this is not true for me.
*As I stay at home, I have to know cooking so I learned that long ago.
*What's more cooking is not a duty for me it's just like a hobby so I like it.
BODY PARAGRAPH 3:I'm obsessed about cleanless.I don't like dirty places.
*Everything or everywhere surrounding me must be clean otherwise I can't cope with such a mess.
*Many people don't think being obsessed is a good habit but in my opinion if it's about cleanless, being obsessed is a good habit.
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Could you please write a conluding statement and also I couldn't find your thesis statement. Why did you want to mention these issues? You should clarify this in your thesis statement; and finally, you have a spelling mistake in "INTRODUCTN". Could you please correct that mistake?
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